you need to follow the proposal checklist this is the most important guidline and do it as a sandwich each point a paragraph don’t mix them together. Everything written should be done regarding that specific school everything in the appendix and every claim should be supported.
I fpund a research paper u can reference if it’s not clear than change it
Address the importance for a private school why is it a big thing for busineess student missing their fees
I will attach an image, it shows a perfect page for the professor
Keep it easy english , I worked on it but it’s no coherent and the sandwich method is difficult to separate them
Don’t generalize fix the appendix make it look professional
Also u need to pick a name for the topic for the proposal that addresses the issue
Plagirisim should be less than 13 %
Appendix is very important don’t remove them (for example for fees, financial statement, the letter from the ministry of education where students are allowed to sit in class even the fees are not paid by their parent guardian .
In the references u will find the school I am writing about, their website